Many authorities on direct marketing strongly advocate longer sales letters over shorter ones. Clearly, letter length can affect response rates, as well as a campaign's production costs. We report results of a successful direct-mail campaign that tested one- and two-page versions of a sales letter. For mailings totaling over 1.15 million pieces, the response rates showed no significant difference between the two letters. But considering production costs, the shorter letter was superior.
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